Friday 16 April 2021
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Hi my name is Tayzsar and I go to Waikowhai Primary School. Wow!!! your animation was so cool that I was blown away. I really liked how you did an animation about Maori tribes sailing across the ocean. Maybe you could tell the reader why Maori traveled across the world to New Zealand. Why did you do this animation? Maybe I will try and do a animation about Maori tribes too. Did you know my class have been learning about Maori games like Wai, the game how you make a pattern out of strings with your hands. Maybe you could add more facts to make your sentences bigger. You should put facts and make your animation longer. Blog you later Asher!!!.
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